我的原创歌曲

RainbowLiu

歌名： I'll Never Be Untrue
词： Rainbow Liu
曲： Ying-jie Lu
歌词： 　

A quick glimpse from you empties into my heart like a clear spring.
It is more profound like a poem, more beautiful than a picture.
Just like a morning beginning a new part of my life.
The world may change my life, but nothing's gonna change my life for you.

　

[CHORUS]

I swear, I'll never hurt you.
I'll never lie. I'll never be untrue.
I'll never give you reason to cry.
I will be unhappy if you were blue.

　

A sweet smile of you appear in my mind like a blinking star.
It is more shining than the sun, more charming than the moonlight.
Just like the saint light given by the angel.
The world may change my life, but nothing's gonna change my love for you.

　

[Repeat CHORUS]

[mp3]http://www.xianlaiju.com/attachment.php?aid=48973&sid=2cSlUGHU[/mp3]

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[ Last edited by 纤手莲心 on 2005-2-23 at 10:15 ]

moonedge

有点唱诗的味道。

monk514

随着一声『恭喜发财』，从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上！
你在恍惚中看见了2两黄金。
楼主的原创音乐怎么有点像圣诞歌曲来，不是演唱者是楼主否，不过也太不尊重自己的作品了吧！

rockdxp

我的妈呀全英文啊???厉害

瑾子

http://edu.sina.com.cn/en/2004-01-30/18489.html

词是原创吗？

妮娜

有意思是想教堂里的唱诗。

darkblue1106

有点点教堂里唱的歌的那种感觉~~~
如果有多点小孩和声那就更象了~~~
西西~~~

rockdxp

总听不了只能下下来了

RainbowLiu

随着一声『富神爷爷到』，从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上！
你在恍惚中看见了1两黄金。
呵呵~~词曲都是原创的！
圣诞歌？只是很抒情啦！
希望大家多提意见！

RainbowLiu

哦，我补充一句，其中的副歌部分是引用了一首Devoted To You的，不同的是最后一句“I'd be unhappy if you were blue”改成了“I will be unhappy if you were blue”。