翻唱0right here waiting 此情可待 小半段

BO1

刚下午上完课，录了小半段。请大家给点意见，我会多多改进！

oceans apart day after day
and i slowly go insane
i hear your voice on the line
but it doesn t stop the pain
if i see you next to never
how can we say forever
wherever you go
whatever you do
i will be right here waiting for you
whatever it takes
or how my heart breaks
i will be right here waiting for you
i took for granted all the times
that i thought would last somehow
i hear the laughter
i taste the tears
but i can t get near you now
oh can t you see it baby
you ve got me going crazy
i wonder how we can survive this romance
but in the end if i m with you
i ll take the chance
oh can t you see it baby
you ve got me going crazy
waiting for you~

liuchuang

听得出你唱得很用心 还不错

稍微注意下齿音....

跟你的英文发音有关.....口语还有待提升哦

wooohu

哇 还有个隐藏track
lz是唱的不错 不过发音需要再再加油噢~~

yaoguner

整首歌都用气音唱下来的，显得有些单薄
有几个英语发音听起来有点JAZZ的味道

BO1

呵，谢谢大家的意见,我也觉得是英文发音和咬字为缺陷，楼上的说的好,我一直在唱JAZZ

小Be

0.0撇开 发音这个话题吧~~
楼主的声音 很赞的说~~~唱法也很与众不同~~~有自己的风格和味道~~很不错~~

BO1

回复 6# 小Be


      谢谢  不过也谢谢你的提醒..确实有你说的那方面不足

Willie_didi

jazz 和 pop 只是一线之差，但若使用不当，则弄巧反挫

狂飞明

支持。。继续努力哦，不错哦。。。

★KIKI★

楼主加油 棒棒哒奥