Ice Box_omarion..!!! 挑战和声与多重效果.!!!

huyimin159

结结实实在家里弄了一个下午,门也没出,连洗手间都没上.
还是有几个音稍微有点不准.请各位见谅,呵呵 ..

         Ice Box
原唱:omarion
翻唱:゛奕zι.﹏
fussin and fightin we back at it again (gin)
i know that it's my fault, you don't understand (no)
i got memories (huh), this is crazy (huh)
you ain't nothin like, the girl i used to know
good wit mom, good wit pop, cool wit all my niggaz (my niggaz)
i should try to decide, wanting to let you in but (no)
damn these memories (huh), and it's crazy (huh)
you ain't nothin like, the girl i used to know
girl i really wanna work this out cuz i'm tired of fighting
and i really hope you still want me the way i want you
i said i really wanna work this out damn girl i'm trying
it's no excuse, no excuse
i got this icebox where my heart used to be
i got this icebox where my heart used to be
no, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold
no, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold (2x)
but i got this icebox where my heart used to be
i got this icebox where my heart used to be
no, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold
no, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold
why can't i, get it right, just can't let it go (go)
i opened up, she let me down, i won't feel that no mo'(no)
i got memories (uh), this is crazy (huh)
shay ain't nothin like, the girl i used to know
don't mean to take it out on you baby but i can't help it
cuz my heart is in the same ol condition that baby left it
and i, i apologize, for makin' you cry
look me in my eyes, and promise you won't do me the same
girl i really wanna work this out cuz i'm tired of fighting
and i really hope you still want me the way i want you
i said i really wanna work this out damn girl i'm trying
it's no excuse, no excuse
i got this icebox where my heart used to be
i got this icebox where my heart used to be
no, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold
no, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold (2x)
but i got this icebox where my heart used to be
i got this icebox where my heart used to be
no, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold
no, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold
uh, i don't wanna be stuck up in this cold, cold world
don't wanna mess this up, better keep your eye on me girl
don't wanna mess this up, better keep your eye on me girl
don't wanna mess this up, better keep your eye on me girl
uh, i don't wanna be stuck up in this cold, cold world
don't wanna mess this up, better keep your eye on me girl
don't wanna mess this up, better keep your eye on me girl
don't wanna mess this up, better keep your eye on me girl
girl i really wanna work this out cuz i'm tired of fighting
and i really hope you still want me the way i want you
i said i really wanna work this out damn girl i'm trying
it's no excuse, no excuse
i got this icebox where my heart used to be
i got this icebox where my heart used to be
no, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i'm so cold, i

[ 本帖最后由 huyimin159 于 2008-9-21 18:46 编辑 ]

huyimin159

怎么没人给我提提意见呢.?
     自己顶先 ..

七宝

感觉抓的 有点 问题 ,这是我给你的意见 希望采纳
但这歌是满难的

huyimin159

嗯,说得没错.
    我又仔细揣摩了一阵,
    确实唱得柔和了点,
    很多地方没有力度,没有爆发力 ..

ssf

节奏，和声，音色 继续加油！