我的原创歌曲

RainbowLiu

歌名： I'll Never Be Untrue
词： Rainbow Liu
曲： Ying-jie Lu
歌词： 　

A quick glimpse from you empties into my heart like a clear spring.
It is more profound like a poem, more beautiful than a picture.
Just like a morning beginning a new part of my life.
The world may change my life, but nothing's gonna change my life for you.

　

[CHORUS]

I swear, I'll never hurt you.
I'll never lie. I'll never be untrue.
I'll never give you reason to cry.
I will be unhappy if you were blue.

　

A sweet smile of you appear in my mind like a blinking star.
It is more shining than the sun, more charming than the moonlight.
Just like the saint light given by the angel.
The world may change my life, but nothing's gonna change my love for you.

　

[Repeat CHORUS]

[mp3]http://www.xianlaiju.com/attachment.php?aid=48973&sid=2cSlUGHU[/mp3]

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[ Last edited by 纤手莲心 on 2005-2-23 at 10:15 ]

RainbowLiu

随着一声『富神爷爷到』，从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上！
你在恍惚中看见了1两黄金。
呵呵~~词曲都是原创的！
圣诞歌？只是很抒情啦！
希望大家多提意见！

RainbowLiu

哦，我补充一句，其中的副歌部分是引用了一首Devoted To You的，不同的是最后一句“I'd be unhappy if you were blue”改成了“I will be unhappy if you were blue”。

RainbowLiu

Originally posted by 纤手莲心 at 2005-2-23 10:21:
感觉I swear, I'll never hurt you.
I'll never lie. I'll never be untrue.
I'll never give you reason to cry.
I will be unhappy if you were blue
多加些和声进去，应该更好听些。。。
很耐听的曲子。。

对，我也这么认为。我有空时试试编辑一下。aeWc_image

RainbowLiu

谢谢大家支持！！！

RainbowLiu

1IPZ_image我还有几首原创英文歌会尽快制作完放上来！

[ Last edited by RainbowLiu on 2005-2-24 at 21:33 ]

RainbowLiu

Originally posted by 香水饮料 at 2005-3-10 13:48:
随着一声『恭喜发财』，从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上！
你在恍惚中看见了2两黄金。
用什么软件做的？

呵呵~~我每次录歌都去录音棚的。

RainbowLiu

Originally posted by tubenye at 2005-3-12 12:32:
随着一声『观音娘娘到』，从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上！
你在恍惚中看见了1两黄金。
有时候感觉上句子之间的停顿不是很明显（我说的实话哟，表生气呀^^），如果可以加强一些的话， ...

呵呵~~当然不会生气了！等下下周开完演唱会我就去录音棚录新歌！

RainbowLiu

随着一声『富神爷爷到』，从天上掉下一滴甘露正好落在你的嘴唇上！
你在恍惚中看见了1两黄金。
顶一记，顺便发表个预告：
明天我将会有全新的原创歌曲发表！

RainbowLiu

Originally posted by 逆天鹰 at 2005-3-21 16:47:
我发现英文歌不是外国人的了，我们中国也有自己的外国歌了，努力！！！

哈哈~~说得好！
谢谢！vVFI_image