酷玩的《Yellow》新手~~

noah520

新手，用cool edit pro~录的歌！只用一个完美混响，没有做太多的后期，希望大大们指点指点！谢谢~~嘻嘻~~

虚心接受大家，批评建议~~谢谢！



Look at the stars,
Look how they shine for you,
And all the thhing you do,
Yeah, they were all Yellow.
I came along,
I wrote a song for you,
And everything you do,
And it was called Yellow.
So then I took my turn,
Oh what a thing to have done,
And it was all Yellow.
Your skin
Oh yeah, your skin and bones,
Turn into something beautiful,
You know, you know I love you so,
You know I love you so.
I swam across,
I jumped across for you,
Oh what a thing to do.
Cos you were all Yellow,
I drew a line,
I drew a line for you,
Oh what a thing to do,
And it was all Yellow.
Your skin,
Oh yeah your skin and bones,
Turn into something beautiful,
And you know,
For you Id bleed myself dry,
For you Id bleed myself dry.
Its true,
Look how they shine for you,
Look how they shine for you,
Look how they shine for,
Look how they shine for you,
Look how they shine for you,
Look how they shine.
Look at the stars,
Look how they shine for you,
And all the things that you do.

[ 本帖最后由 noah520 于 2008-9-15 00:32 编辑 ]

noah520

谢谢版主大人精心点评，本人向来对拍子现在都控制的不好，不知道有什么办法可以把拍子捉的准一点呢？