★craig david的unbelievable(新人出来乍道.请高手指点一二)

safelos222

歌词:craig david - unbelievable
album: the story goes

always said
i would know where to find love
always thought
i'd be ready and strong enough
but sometimes
i just felt i could give up
but you came
and you changed my whole world now
i'm somewhere
i've never been before
now i see
what love means
it's so unbelievable
and i don't wanna let it go
it's something so beautiful
flowing down like a waterfall
i feel like you've been
forever a part of me
and it's so unbelievable
to finally be in love
somewhere i never thought i'd be
in my heart in my head
it's so clear now
hold my hand
you've got nothing to fear now
i was lost
and you rescued me somehow
i'm alive
i'm in love you complete me
and i've never been here before
when i think of what i have
and this chance i nearly lost
i can't help but breakdown
and cry
oh yeah
break down and cry
oh, oh yeah

[ 本帖最后由 safelos222 于 2008-9-24 21:48 编辑 ]

safelos222

自己沙发坐掉~~~~~~~~~~

safelos222

恩..非常感谢这位大大....我会对你所说的多做研究..........你这么一说...我感觉很多地方需要改进............

safelos222

原帖由 stevenwalsh 于 2008-9-25 01:53 发表
感觉很好哈，声音可以再圆润一点，呵呵，加油～～～支持～～～

谢谢谢谢..由于第一次录..很多地方都不是很好。

safelos222

原帖由 飞飞熊 于 2008-9-25 03:00 发表
很欧美的声音，感觉再修饰一下，应该可以很叼

请问如何修饰内~~~~~~

safelos222

原帖由 11910000 于 2008-9-25 20:17 发表
你的声音很欧美。。
学习下转音吧 多练习下 还有一些颤抖的音 听完你唱的 感觉情感方面少了些 但是总体感觉U got great talent!!!! Just do it .  be  yourself 我 相信你能blow us away!!!!!!
PS:好多 强人啊 ！！ ...

thanks........................

safelos222

有没有高手呀.....

safelos222

原帖由 Vinni 于 2008-10-2 05:06 发表
声音、音高都很好。只是对于这首歌来说口气太硬了，有种咄咄逼人的感觉，跟歌词所表达的情感不搭。可以稍微柔软一点。

那方面还要加强呢?

safelos222

我帮自己小顶一下....对各位朋友提的意见研究了好久....

safelos222

回复 41# 48543696@qq.com

感谢这位朋友。发音我还会继续加强。不过貌似整首歌都没有SH打头的词呀