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作者: spiderkid 时间: 2008-12-31 18:45:27 标题: unwritten

很多长错的地方
I am unwritten, can't read my mind, I'm undefined
I'm just beginning, the pen's in my hand, ending unplanned

Staring at the blank page before you
Open up the dirty window
Let the sun illuminate the words that you could not find

Reaching for something in the distance
So close you can almost taste it
Release your inhibitions
Feel the rain on your skin
No one else can feel it for you
Only you can let it in
No one else, no one else
Can speak the words on your lips
Drench yourself in words unspoken
Live your life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins
The rest is still unwritten

Oh, oh, oh

I break tradition, sometimes my tries, are outside the lines
We've been conditioned to not make mistakes, but I can't live that way

Staring at the blank page before you
Open up the dirty window
Let the sun illuminate the words that you could not find

Reaching for something in the distance
So close you can almost taste it
Release your inhibitions
Feel the rain on your skin
No one else can feel it for you
Only you can let it in
No one else, no one else
Can speak the words on your lips
Drench yourself in words unspoken
Live your life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins

Feel the rain on your skin
No one else can feel it for you
Only you can let it in
No one else, no one else
Can speak the words on your lips
Drench yourself in words unspoken
Live your life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins
The rest is still unwritten

Staring at the blank page before you
Open up the dirty window
Let the sun illuminate the words that you could not find

Reaching for something in the distance
So close you can almost taste it
Release your inhibitions
Feel the rain on your skin
No one else can feel it for you
Only you can let it in
No one else, no one else
Can speak the words on your lips
Drench yourself in words unspoken
Live your life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins

Feel the rain on your skin
No one else can feel it for you
Only you can let it in
No one else, no one else
Can speak the words on your lips
Drench yourself in words unspoken
Live your life with arms wide open
Today is where your book begins
The rest is still unwritten
The rest is still unwritten
The rest is still unwritten

Oh, yeah, yeah

作者: zy250039 时间: 2008-12-31 20:38:24

很喜欢的歌。。。楼主也不错啊。。。。加油哈。。。

作者: kevinwang747 时间: 2008-12-31 22:43:22

张力确实叼啊，吼高潮会不会接不过气啊，我K的时候狂缓不过气啊。。

作者: popo8706 时间: 2008-12-31 23:21:14

我特意下载下来听呢。。。很不错了，可以考虑去酒吧做驻唱。。。会有人欣赏的

作者: spiderkid 时间: 2009-1-2 19:35:25

woohu帮我点亮不然没人真是的你也不给我顶
要不给我金币也行

作者: crab 时间: 2009-1-16 13:12:58

5# spiderkid

囧~~~不能换一句啊，我帮你顶就是了

作者: _sea_ 时间: 2009-1-16 20:20:49

好有味道厉害！超喜欢这首歌发音也好好听媲美原唱呢

作者: wooohu 时间: 2009-1-17 00:04:03

啊啊啊啊啊那次听完忘顶了因为一直在和你说话嘛就给忘了因为总觉得自己已经顶了……汗了

作者: areathe 时间: 2009-1-20 17:11:19

LZ的声音很有特点呢~~和原唱的声音很神似！！支持勒！

作者: magic52mj 时间: 2009-1-21 02:35:57

我久攻不下的一首歌啊…… 只能说很难 LZ唱到这种程度太不容易了

作者: Arill 时间: 2009-3-12 20:39:27

好辛苦啊~唱这个声音要够浑厚的涅~~~~~~加油!我也准备试试了~

作者: james0075 时间: 2009-3-13 09:37:05

很赞，听着很有感觉

作者: 小把戏 时间: 2009-5-2 20:30:06

超赞~~~楼主真的很不错！

作者: heather426 时间: 2009-5-23 11:51:44

唱得很好哦~~声音很舒服。发音也很舒服~~原唱更加狂放点~~这个版本温柔点呢~~

作者: Anno~ 时间: 2009-5-23 14:36:45

觉得你唱腔有点像 COCO~~~

作者: 小阿凯 时间: 2009-5-23 14:58:25

每个地方都很好
就是感觉有点唱得太用力了。。。。

作者: shirely 时间: 2009-5-29 22:24:46

顶贴来了~
很原生态的翻唱，虽然有不合拍的地方，但是听得出唱歌时感觉非常到位了~
建议增加对歌曲细节处的控制，其它的已经很棒了噢

作者: EratleWang 时间: 2010-6-26 14:08:34

蛮不错的哦~~支持一个~~

作者: YuanKX 时间: 2010-11-26 10:41:19

- 哇啊;好听啊媲美原唱！

作者: spiderkid 时间: 2011-11-6 21:28:12

自我冒泡
看看有人会继续关注此帖没

作者: aoecheng 时间: 2013-5-6 21:42:49

唱的好啊！我在发现我之前就听过你的翻唱，看来咱俩蛮有缘的！

作者: benbenbingo 时间: 2013-5-9 00:19:48

喜欢的一首歌楼主的翻唱加入了自己的风格比较搭
个人觉得似乎高潮不分爆发力不足还是神马原因穿透力弱了一些些
但是还是很不错很不错喜欢喜欢

作者: 89750535 时间: 2013-5-9 21:36:25

，，哈哈~ 赞一个我下载了正是我所需要的哈哈

作者: aoecheng 时间: 2016-1-26 23:56:58

比我唱的好多了！

作者: kangjune 时间: 2016-1-27 18:50:41

声音很特别！！不错的演绎支持

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